We were playing tag over at Jack’s, Sara was the seek. She started to count so. I run to my bedroom to hide in my closet. but the closet was too small for me. But Sara was going into my mum and dad’s room and then she comes into my room but she had 1 minute. But she said I give up. I said come here she was coming and she tries to get in the closet. But she couldn't get in she called everyone in the house. My mum called the cop. There here yes I can get out I wish there to get me out. ‘I am Hungry get me out ’ ‘ok we will do it soon. I was in the closet for 50 minute. It was like I was about to die and then there got me out so I went to eat. And the. we never played hide and seek
Killer Whales
Killer whales are known as orca and the largest whale member they are special. There are one of the largest animal whales that eat tuna, herring, sharks, and ray. squid and more... orca are powerful predators capable of killing leopard seals and great white sharks. One of the most powerful in the world and one of the largest it makes orca one of the largest alive there are about 6-8 feet sharks are about 5-7 feet orca are the longest then sharks.I think that sharks are scared of orca because a orca can kill the shark that why killer whales are strong than sharks.Orca likes cold water like the north pacific ocean.
You didn't describe how you got stuck ion the closet. Why couldn't you get out? You said, "I said come here she was coming and she tries to get in the closet. But she couldn't get in she called everyone in the house." This doesn't tell the reader what happened.
ReplyDeleteHow did the police get you out? You didn't tell us.
Do we care that you went and got something to eat? No! That doesn't matter at all. I wanted more detail about you being stuck.